1. What is my thesis?
Korean cities should control the Medical Detective Systems to prevent the tragedy of epidemic disease.
2. What is the opposite position?
The government can do better works, so the cities's Medical Detective Systems are unnecessary.
3. What arguments can I anticipate?
a)the government can have broad information than local government.
Korean cities should control the Medical Detective Systems to prevent the tragedy of epidemic disease.
2. What is the opposite position?
The government can do better works, so the cities's Medical Detective Systems are unnecessary.
3. What arguments can I anticipate?
a)the government can have broad information than local government.
b)Cities do not have enough medical abilities to know disease.
4. How will I counter those arguments?
4. How will I counter those arguments?
a) In medical treatments, we need precise information, no broad!
b) There are enough number of local laboratories.
My Refutation and Concession
It's sure that my arguments are new ideas and very unfamiliar. However, all of my arguments are based upon real facts. There will be a number of people who can't understand my opinions that Cities should control the Medical Detective Systems. They may think that it's unnecessary to change the system of disease control. However, the history tell us that existing system can not manage epidemic disease and it also tell us that existing system can be changed to more effective systems. The people who can't accept my opinions will argue that the government can have broad information than local government. It's true that the government can have really big information and broad ability to know medical problems. However, this is not matter in epidemic disease. When we should study the epidemic disease, we need more specific and precise information about it. If the government have to start study of the epidemic disease, It can't have them , because they have not had these information ever.
In contrast, Cities have their own information such as traditional and citizen's information. Second, the people may argue that cities do not have enough medical abilities to know new disease. However, If cities have to control the Medical Detective Systems, cities would improve their ability to know new virus. Also, cities already have the ability to know new disease. According to naver news, Korea have large amount of laboratory in many regions. It means that there are no difference between government's work and cities' work. Actually, the cancer laboratories are concentrated on Incheon. So this is stereotypical claim that the central government will work more effectively. The truth is that at least in medical parts, the cities would work more effectively.
In contrast, Cities have their own information such as traditional and citizen's information. Second, the people may argue that cities do not have enough medical abilities to know new disease. However, If cities have to control the Medical Detective Systems, cities would improve their ability to know new virus. Also, cities already have the ability to know new disease. According to naver news, Korea have large amount of laboratory in many regions. It means that there are no difference between government's work and cities' work. Actually, the cancer laboratories are concentrated on Incheon. So this is stereotypical claim that the central government will work more effectively. The truth is that at least in medical parts, the cities would work more effectively.
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