1) What score do you think you deserve?
I suppose that I might deserve one point. I think that I gotta first draft's structure and understand the persuasive essay's purpose and structure. However, I couldn't make effective persuasive essay. Also, I couldn't make flexible start in my essay.
2) What did you do well?
First, I understand the effective persuaisvie essay, and make a creative topic that can be just my thoughts. Second, I made a new topic that no one made it before.
3) What could you have done better?
My topic is really fresh than others. So, I had to worry to make a good organization that I could make good structure in my essay.
4) Which part of the classical argument did you use the best?
In my classical argument, I think the narration is the best. As I said, my topic is really fresh so people may not be able to know about my topic. I think in narration, I provided enough information to make audience interested.
5) Which part of the classical argument did you use the most poorly?
I think the introduction was weak. I couldn't get any information that makes me understand my topic. So, I did not have enough research about my new idea. It makes the abstract introduction.
6) What's your strategy to make your second draft better?
I think the first one for the better essay is research! I need to have more specific research at least four. I also should try to make my opinion more reliable. After I finish enough research, I should refair my introduction. I may need to explain how my topic can be the debatable. If I have more time, I will include humors in my essay.
My plan : 1) Research
2) Refair my introduction
3) Retain my humor sense in my essay
First, I understand the effective persuaisvie essay, and make a creative topic that can be just my thoughts. Second, I made a new topic that no one made it before.
3) What could you have done better?
My topic is really fresh than others. So, I had to worry to make a good organization that I could make good structure in my essay.
4) Which part of the classical argument did you use the best?
In my classical argument, I think the narration is the best. As I said, my topic is really fresh so people may not be able to know about my topic. I think in narration, I provided enough information to make audience interested.
5) Which part of the classical argument did you use the most poorly?
I think the introduction was weak. I couldn't get any information that makes me understand my topic. So, I did not have enough research about my new idea. It makes the abstract introduction.
6) What's your strategy to make your second draft better?
I think the first one for the better essay is research! I need to have more specific research at least four. I also should try to make my opinion more reliable. After I finish enough research, I should refair my introduction. I may need to explain how my topic can be the debatable. If I have more time, I will include humors in my essay.
My plan : 1) Research
2) Refair my introduction
3) Retain my humor sense in my essay
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