The Confirmation

1. What is my thesis?
Korean cities should control the Medical Detective Systems to prevent the tragedy of epidemic disease.

2. What types of source am I using to defend my thesis? 
I am using  new articles, a famous and relevant overseas examples

3. Are my arguments mostly based on evidence, logic or emotion?
My arguments is really new thing so I can't sure that evidences I found can support my opinions strongly. However, I have exact evidences and examples. Also I  do not have any estimation of facts. However, It's still worry that I do not have enough statistics.

My Confirmation

 I've shown the overseas examples. However, when I show these examples, I can sure that these difficulties in examples are not match for city's abilities. There was many challenges to deal with chorea or eboravirus, but if city have the Medical Detective systems, these challenges are easily solved. 
 First challenge of Dr. John Snow's trials was that he couldn't get enough information and research because, he did individual works. He visited house to house to get some information but it's sure that this way to get information had limitation. Also the amount of information was very small. As a results, He concluded wrong decisions so he had to spend more time to get more information. However, this problems can be solved by city's ability. The cities already have information about house's death and its cause of death. It means that cities always have enough information that is necessary to evaluate epidemic disease's research. Also these information should be precise to use as a experiments. 
 Second challenge of Dr. John Snow's trials was that he should prove his works to confirm his theory. He might submit his theory and the Governments should have precise information to control their citizens. So it's necessarily necessary to have time to test the theory. This process may have really hard time for patients, However, if cities have his works, there will be no extra time to test his works. Because the city is government's affiliated organization, cities's works do not need to be proved by governments. And The cities's experiment always have done by experts in its area. So there are no problems to use city's theory with no suspensions.
An article from naver news makes an interesting case about treats of epidemic disease.

United Statues have inappropriate reaction to control the Ebora virus. They treats patients very toughly. 

 As I said, parties can make wrong decision because they do not know exact situation in city's citizen. However, basically, Cities have traditional information about their citizens. So they know their characters. If there is epidemic disease in a city. city can control that situation, using appropriate treatments  because they know their citizens's personalty. So If city control the Medical Detective Systems, they can use useful and traditional information about citizen to avoid epidemic disease. 

 It's true that controlling the disease is very sensitive and difficult aspects but It 's also true that this part should be the more precise and clear. The cities can make this work very well. Therefore cities should control the Medical Detective Systems.