Korean City should control disease to manage the Medical Detective Systems .Now days, most of city have really big size of populations. However, most of them are fragile to disease. This can lead new advanced bacteria or germs, and new bacteria or germs can confuse human being.
Most of countries such as United Kingdom or France have controlled this problem. Controlling this is called Medical Detective Systems. After this system was controlled by government or nations, This System had the most effective power to manage the disease. So I want to reveal that City's role of Medical Detective is important for human being and to argue that Korean cities should control this system.
My first research question was this; What is the Medical Detective?
2) How I found my argument
My first research question was this; What is the Medical Detective? This question is base of my argument and it also can be clue to start my argument. As I continued researching, there are many usages of the Medical Detective. For example, it is used as a way of detecting criminal by searching medical clue. However I want to use this wold as detecting epidemic in cities. Therefore I need to define the wold, Medical Detective. We are now trying to approach god's area, a medical science. The ultimate purpose of this is making people health. However, we are now very vulnerable to epidemic so I wonder how it can be prevented. I found city's role as the Medical Detective. Now, I want to reveal Korean city's important role of controlling disease.
3) New research questions
I have several questions that need to be resolved.
a) What are the examples of Medical Detective other than Korea.
b) What is the limit of ability of the city's government
I'll continue browsing the internet and read books to find examples.
4) Connections to the Harvard Sampler
This argument has many connections to the Harvard Sampler. It obviously is directly related to the medical detective. In my persuade writing, there will be many examples that are included in Harvard Sam in my writing Second, controlling disease is related to evolution because animals also have controlled disease themselves.
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